Wednesday, April 30, 2008

A blog dialogue- The Wedding...pt. 3

'Hey ladies, we gotta start getting ready to go out. James is standing at the alter and the groom and groomsmen are makin there way out there.' Diva interrupts the convo to alert the bride.

She stands and Deja pulls Eb's veil over her eyes making eye contact to try and determine what Eb wants her to do. She smiles and nods and Deja allows the veil to fall… She made the decision.

As places are taken and the bridesmaids begin making their procession down the aisle to the tune of Wreckless Love, Eb takes a deep breathe and says a little prayer.

Dear God,
I pray that this be your will and I ask that you bless this union for all days. Amen.

As she steps out and begins her procession, All-4-One standing in the balcony directly above the alter, start their acappella rendition of So Much in Love

Stacie takes a handkerchief and wipes her eyes as 1/3 makes eye contact with Charles and smiles; -1- puts arm around KB and Jintu gives Queen a light neck kiss; Rashan licks his lips and smiles over at Jersey who uncrosses and crosses her legs seductively; Char discreetly links fingers with Buttercup while Britt slips her arm through 1980's; Cannon continues to talk under his breath with Zephi and Niga ignores them, staring at Don wondering about him. Only a few actually pay attention to the bride as she walks down the aisle, but only one matters… and his eyes are locked.

Eb's prayer lingers in her mind and she stares into the eyes of the man she is about to commit to for the rest of her life...

And she stops. Because she feels his eyes on her as they bore ferociously… she cannot move. She turns slightly and looks to the men standing to the left of her future husband (Dessex, One Man, Don, and Rashan). There he stood, watching her with quiet strength, unmoved and stoic. She is frozen where she stands and knows that she just cannot move forward.

Soumy, seeing the hesitation, leaves the canopied alter and walks up to her, which causes chatter to break out. He sees her distraction and understands its roots, but wants to push through it and make this woman his bride. He takes her hand with one hand and moves the veil up with the other… the room fades around them.

'Eb….'

Eyes cast down

'You can trust me baby?'

Eyes make contact, tear stung

Soumy takes a deep breath, stands up straighter and asks 'You still want him in your life don't you?'

An apologetic shrug

'You don't want me?'

Eb eyes grow large and she places a hand on his face, 'No! No! That's not it… I love you Soum… more than you know… but….' as tears begin to shed, 'I just can't stop thinking about him since that night. I've tried to shake it… Did everything in my power to do so… but I just can't. I don't know what to do Soumy… Tell me, what do you want me to do.' He puts an arm around her and holds her in a warm embrace.

James standing at the alter ready to commence the ceremony breaks into their world with a booming voice that is really unexpected.

'Eb, Soumy… I want to talk to you two. There are some things that need to be addressed, and clearly you two have not done so. I have sat on the sidelines for too long, and I want the success of black couples to be a typical thing, so com'mon. Let's go talk.'

Rashan looks over at me with the Smirk, and I shake my head and reprimand him with a mouthed 'stop it, jerk'

As James, Soumy, and Eb leave the main hall, and walk to the groom's room… Diva puts one hand on her hip and asks the question that we all wanna know the answer to...

'Which one of ya'll tworked it out for Eb? Cause aint no way she's duckin Soum for anything less than that. One of ya'll got some quote'n'quote good dick that she can't get past...'

Dessex looks over at One Man whose smiling over at Deja. Rashan blows kisses to Jersey who is performing fellatio on her finger causing Cannon to climb over the back of her pew so that he can sit next to her and fantasize. Jameil rolls her eyes and shakes her head at Cannon mumbling 'youngin'. Don is distracted by KB and -1- kissing in the back of the church and doesn't pay attention to what Diva is asking. Swag shifts a bit to give them room and glances up at me, motioning to them and I giggle softly.

Snapping her fingers and walking over to the boys to get their attention, Diva inquires, 'Which one of you hit that?' looking at each groomsman.

They all stand there shaking their heads no, and Diva's gaze lingers on Rashan.

'Well... one of you did, cause she was starin up here when she stopped her procession.'

Rashan looks back at Diva completely unaffected by her glare. 'Well it ain't me, so you can just stop looking this way.'

One Man, Dessex, and Don have yet to respond.

Deja pipes up from the bride's side, 'Why are you ashamed of your dick action. Clearly you did a good job, whichever one of you did it… so why act like it aint you.'

'Cause I save my 'tworking' for my lady and don't feel like I'm part of this conversation,' Dessex pipes up, pointing to his lady sitting in the pew behind Jersey who has moved to touching and fondling her own breasts causing Cannon to slump a bit in his seat so that he can be at eye level. Every so often, he sticks his tongue out and Jintu chuckles at his antics.

One Man and Don are left, but neither one say a word.

'Fine, you don't want to say anything… then I'll just have to assume it was Don, since you guys kissed awhile back,' Diva shrugs…

'A kiss and sex are two different things, so you can just throw that logic out the window,' Don responds.

'Well, why won't you answer?' I look directly at him.

'Because what I do is what I do, and I don't feel I have to answer… besides, I'm not the only single groomsman up here….' deflecting the attention from himself to One.

'But One's only partner has four fingers and one thumb and is attached to his right arm…,' Deja points out.

'Everyone has a first time.'
Rashan interjects

'Well then, who is it? You or One Man?'

Don and One Man look at each other, shrug and both stand silent.

'This is some shit.' 1980 adds. Looking over at Britt, 'See, aren't you happy we didn't leave?' Britt furrows her brow and crosses her arms.

'I would never be in a situation like that.'

'What a fucking surprise.' KB retorts

-1- laughs lightly at KB, 'How did you even hear her?' KB just shrugs and goes back to running her fingers thru -1-'s hair.

Just then, James, Eb, and Soumy walk back into the church. All eyes look in their direction and James begins to speak.

25 comments:

i.can't.complain. said...

*on the edge of my cyber-seat*

DESY !!

this isn't fair, girl

great job as always.

it's amazing how u know us all so well.

for real

i cannot wait to see who the "other man" is.

*still waiting*

-1-

who? said...

I can do nothing but smile at this... this is the longest dialog yet and the most intriguing of them all... you made me out to be a freaky boy too, and I ain't even say nothing!

...love this whole thing though...

Chari said...

daym u got it just ryt once again...I duff ma hat to the pro!

Adei von K said...

you're KILLING me!!!!

1. with all this wedding talk
2. with the cliff-hangers!!!

Desy said...

@i.can't- hahaha... aren't i just evil wit it sometimes...lol... but seriously... it's just cause it gets so long so i find a cut off point that suggests more and post that portion... part 4 has been started and is being formulated as we speak

@can- you aren't a freak?!?! coulda fooled me...lol

@char- why thank u char, but there is no need for all of that...lol... i'm just having fun... no great work of art here..lol

@stacie- haha, you were SO part of the reason why i started this 'wedding' dialogue... 'everyone one i kno is getting engaged/married'... so i had to make it happen in the blog world too...lol... plus i'm in the same situation as u with that... so figured, what the hell... let's blog about it... in a unique way...lol

Jazzy said...

How you gonna end with Eb just about to say who it is and then begin with something else?

LMAO @ my role. The hand on hip thing really is me.

Ok...Now I'm not exactly sure who "him" is, but I'm still hoping it's _ _ _ _ _ _ ! LOL

Queen of My Castle said...

LMAO!! You slay me with Diva's character. Too funny. Oddly enough I can see her acting like that, too.

kit von b. said...

ughhhhhhh. i'm such a groupie for your dialogues. i'm sure u know this already tho. i love these interactions! like i know us all so well. this takes talent my dear, and you've got it.

-KB

Charles said...

Did I mention already that you're talented?? No? Well...you're very talented and you know you got me wanting more...

swag_ambassador said...

gahlee gurl... thas all I can say. u needa sell this to a screenwriter. lol

James Tubman said...

seems so funny that i am a preacher in your stories

i guess what i do is preach to a certain extent but i never really intended to do so

i like the line that i had with eb and soumy

nice (even though i wouldn't have said something like that bt good try lol)

it seems as if you know something about psychology based on how you write these stories

you probably could teach me a thing or two lol

Jameil said...

diva i'm hoping it's him too!!! DYING for it to be him!!! PLEASE LET IT BE HIM!! COME ON DESY!! IF YOU HAVE A HEART!! your folk w/the sexual antics in the church have me ill.

Jameil said...

oh yeah and it's time for you to wrap the next one up. make it as long as you want.

dessex said...

so what chapter is this in yo book? lol

I love this story. Too drama at a wedding for me thats why i want a small one

One Man’s Opinion said...

This is too funny.

Rashan Jamal said...

Ummm... why my stripper gotta have no class. Just cuz I met one girl like that... now it gotta be immortalized and stuff. LOL

I don't know who it is, but I know who it's not. I dont mess with engaged/dating/married women... anymore. LOL

1/3 said...

OMG! I'm sooo late:-(. I was literally on the edge of my seat with this one.

LMAO @ KB retorting at britt. You do know us well lol

who? said...

you aren't a freak?!?! coulda fooled me...lol

wouldn't you like to know the truth? lol ; )

dejanae said...

Me and One?
dont u know i dont mess with no ashey fools?
lmao

Jinta said...

maybe one and don performed the deed together?

lol at diva's thunder

Desy said...

@diva- because u like to interrupt…lol… he would definitely stop talkin to me if I did that to him…lol

@queen- I like makin her the hnic of all the drama… she knows the right way to put it all out there and get the info

@kb-*blushing* why thank you mah dea… u are duh bomb ass groupie if I ever knew one…lol

@charles- wanting more huh?....i think I learned some of that from you…lol; u kno it's only the cliff hangers that do it to you

@swag- lmao… neva dat… I don't know if the public eye is ready for you bloggers…lol

@tub- way to put me out there james…lol… it's alright… I just do a jist… whether it hits the bullseye or not… I did it…lol; and is that a real profile pic… I'm blown away… nice to see ya face finally

@jam-et tu jameil…lol… how ya'll gonna claim to be his friend and throw him out there like that…lmao; and don't worry… the next will be the last… I'll save the reception for another series…

@dessex- haha… no book- don't have the discipline… I'm elopin with my parents, my potentials parents and maybe siblings (if their lucky)… I'll throw a big bash later with friends… at least that's how I feel today…lol

@one- I'm glad u're enjoy it

@shan- can I help what women u tend to gravitate to??? Riiiiiight, cause that's the reason why u don't want it to be u…lol

@1/3- especially my aim fam… I gotch'all on lock…lol…

@canon- *raise an eyebrow*… boy… I don't think u're ready…lol

@deja- *lookin back at my post*…did I imply that u and One had somethin?... I thought I was havin u put out that he and his hand had somethin goin on…lol

@jintu- now THAT'S why I like u… the only one to put out the threesome… hahaha…

Eb the Celeb said...

girly girly girly... smh... even though I love being in the middle of this soap opera... you cant be doing me like that though... I cant wait for the next installment...

and I am loving your new profile pic!

Don said...

desy, desy, desy...

guerreiranigeriana said...

um, wow!!!...the exotic stripper fondling herself in the church at a wedding?!...see drama!!...

soumynona said...

LOL, alas the compassionate understanding Soumy. I fighter for love...yeah...thats funny for real!! =>
btw, Don't think I haven't peeped how your description of women is far more detailed than your description of the men either in all your stories =>
Its all good, you are safe here!! =>