Monday, April 28, 2008

A blog dialogue- The Wedding...pt.2

-1-'s holding tightly to KB in a firm embrace as she shouted and pulled to get over to Britt. Britt, not one for confrontation, turned to 1980

'I want to go…,' glancing back to KB, 'Now!'

KB breaks free from -1-'s embrace and just as she reaches Britt, 1980 stands in front of her, blocking KB's access to Britt's hair.

'Calm it down KB! Is it all that serious?!' 1980 looking down from his towering stature at KB who stood over a foot below him.

-1- walks over to KB as she stayed fuming where she stood not bothering to try to push through 1980 and whispered in her ear,

'Baby, ease up. I know what's up, but you can't act like this. She's not worth it and you know that she's not gonna change. Just do you and know that I care about you. I mean, honestly, isn't that all that matters.'

KB turns and looks up at -1-, catching the intense eye contact that -1- was given.

At this point, Jameil and Stacie walk in joking and laughing about the conversation that Jameil had with drunk Rashan last night.

Jameil waves when she sees me and Diva, but pulls up at the sight of everyone staring at the KB, -1-, 1980, Britt cluster.

'What's going on?' Stacie looks at everyone not completely understanding what she missed, but knowing that it was probably good.

-1- leads KB back to their pew and 1980 sits down on the other side, a few rows behind KB and -1- and pulls Britt to sit next to him as she continues expressing her desire to leave.

Stacie whispers over to Jameil, 'See, I knew we should have gotten here early. Got me missin good blog drama.'

1/3, Diva, and I walk back over to Eb's room as Lea walks in holding a Corona on the arm of Sojourn, Char and Buttercup chatting up trickle in shortly after, and Hadassah and Roxy stroll in getting acquainted with one another as they grab a seat near Britt and 1980.

'Hey, where's Charles?' I whisper over to 1/3.

'I wore him out last night girl. I'll be surprised if he can walk.' She does a light hair flip with her shiny straight locks that look breathtaking today. I'm stunned a bit not expecting the comment that fell out of her mouth and immediately stop my step.

She laughs and pulls my hand to get me moving 'I'm just kidding. We're takin it slow, for obvious reasons. He called this morning and said he had to stop and get something before comin to the church. Probably his suit…So last minute that man.'

As we walk into the bride's room, a woman walks into the church, who pulls the attention of the entire room. She a statuesque, long legged exotic looking woman that has an overwhelming amount of flawless makeup meticulously applied, looks around the church and begins searching for a seat. She is dressed in a soft sundress that does little to hide her razor sharp curves. Stace leans over to Jameil and asks if she recognizes her. Jameil shakes her head no. -1- stops her lowered conversation with KB and watches this woman walk. KB looks at -1- with the face of a jealous woman, quickly grips -1- face and makes her meet her eyes, 'Here.' Swag can't help but stare at this woman due to her likeness to Te.edr.a Mo.s.es and leans over to Char asking him if he was the only one who thought so. Char shrugs not knowing who Te.edr.a was, which leads Swag into a full out discussion of how he needed to download songs from her.

Rashan rushes out from the back room on the groom's side and slows his swagger when he hits the main church, making sure he's looking completely together and greets the no name nubian.

'Hey beautiful. Thank you for coming. How bout you take a seat right here,' gesturing to the pew directly in front of where he would be standing.

As he heads back, he gets cornered by Jameil.

'Who is that?' Jameil folds her arms and waits for the explanation.

'No one that you need to worry your pretty little head about. Just go back and sit down.' Rashan tries to brush her off, but Jameil doesn't give up quite so easily.

'Is that the stripper from last night that you kept going on and on about?'

He shrugs and pushes past her, laughing a little because he knew he was gonna be having some fun.

As he walked back into the groom's room, Dessex was pushing Soumy to his feet and Don and One were starting to get fully dressed.

'Yo, Jersey is here.'

The guys look at each other then back to Rashan.

'Are you out of your mind? What the hell is she doing here?' asks Don

'I didn't really think she would come. But she sent me a text letting me know she was here, and when I walked out there, she was.'

Soumy tries to recall this woman, but doesn't and looks to Dessex. 'Who is that?'

Dessex shakes his head, laughing. 'The woman who lap danced your sanity right out of you last night.'

Soumy gaze shifts to Rashan with a look of sheer dread on his face.

'Shan, what the hell is wrong with you man? Do you know that Eb will rip her face off if she finds out who that woman is? Whachu tryna do to me?' Soum shakes his head.

Rashan laughs, 'Don't sweat it man. Just tell Eb she's my date. In truth, she is. You don't have to tell her anything and we are the only one's who know how I know her, so it should be cool. Now stop worryin about it and get yourself together. You got about 20min before 'I do's' get thrown around and you need to be wrappin your head around that shit.'

Silence falls and the guys continue to get ready in the comfortable quiet; a sharp contrast to the whirlwind commotional room of the bride, who is having an emotional breakdown.

Turning to Deja, Eb whispers, 'Deja, I don't think I can do this. I mean…COMMIT COMMIT?!?! Forever EVER,' looks down at her left hand that was delicately adorned by a classically designed 2 carat princess cut diamond set in white gold, the engagement ring that felt so heavy on her hand today.

Deja responds surprised, 'Why not?'

'Because…I..umm… I think I might be…well… feeling someone else. At first, I thought it was just wedding jitters, but I'm really thinking this is more. He makes me feel sooo amazing, and he is such an enigma. I can never tell how he feels, which makes me yearn for him even more. I feel like a school girl with him, which tells me that this really is something that needs to be addressed. I don't know, what do you think?'

'Well who is it?'

'Well…ummm… it's….'

31 comments:

kit von b. said...

i wonder just how tall 1980 is. -1- better act like she knows! hmmmmm @ this gentlemen. lol @ rashan bringing "jersey". reminds me of "candy" from "the best man"...

-KB

who? said...

awwww... you are drawin with that finish. It's like a book that I gotta wait two days for to read the next chapter... the stripper comes to the wedding though? and the bride feeling somebody else? straight out the script of a soap opera...

(patiently waiting)

Rashan Jamal said...

Just for the record...if i brought a stripper in public, she wouldn't be giving nobody I know a lap dance. I would have to pretend that last night was her first and last night on the job. LOL

I wonder who Eb is thinking about. Actually, I don't wonder b/c I already know, but for the sake of the comment, I wonder who.

More fighting, please.

Don said...

LOL.

mannnnn, where do i begin?! first off, and as usual, your writing talents are superb. *THIS is desy, the talented female blogger i was telling you about.* very, very, talented and creative and determined there, desy.

this is probably the funniest excerpt you've written. KB turns and looks up at -1-, catching the intense eye contact that -1- was given. i held my breathe when i read this. lol. i felt that ish. intense. the dialogue between KB and -1- is something serious.


the stripper looked like teedra moses...good deal.

and i see 1/3's even getting her groove thang on.

the young bloggers are the bomb.

Charles said...

You know I gotta read more. I don't know how you come up with this stuff, but its really good

kit von b. said...

bahahahahahahahahahahaahahahaaahah @ don.

" i felt that ish. intense. the dialogue between KB and -1- is something serious..."

i felt that shit too.

-KB

1/3 said...

LOL @ don

I could have sworn that I commented on this last nite??? Anyway now that I have rested I love it! Um who is this mystery woman and I wonder whats gonna happen now lol

Well I want to know more!! I love these dialogues lol

Jazzy said...

I have a good guess on who the dude is...if I'm going just by Eb's comments on his blog alone. LOL!

Too bad it's not _____ though. Now THAT would have made for some good comedy! hehehehehe

Can't wait to read what happens next!

Chari said...

how d heck did u know I did know who teedra moses is?

*nods head*

you must be a witch...

soumynona said...

Wow! I feel like Im watching My bestfriends wedding mixed with the Best Man mixed with The Wood mixed with the Wedding Planner - Hell even the Wedding Singer LOL. I almost shed a tear too. It was nice while it lasted but it was def for the best!! Do the words eerily similar ring a bell to you??

Jameil said...

i'ma need you to know i wouldn't be cornering rah like that over his date. girl please. 2 carat princess cut diamond? princess is my fave cut. FORGET THAT OTHER DUDE!! PRINCESS IS CALLIN YOU!!

Adei von K said...

oh Lord, a three parter.

*eye brow raise at the cliff hanger ending*

why you got people bringing strippers to the wedding!?!?!?! TRIFE!!

Jinta said...

i have no idea of who, but it will be interesting to know

James Tubman said...

that's one wild and crazy wedding lol

i wonder how long it normally takes you to make up these stories

it seems as if the just flow out of your mind effortlessly

so when are you publishing

dessex said...

well who is he....

I love my role in this story, I think I am the funny one lol.

dejanae said...

ima need more lines
and a starring role.lol
a fight
a love affair


ha
good ish

Brittany said...

Ha! you had to put me in here with something about my hair. I love it.

swag_ambassador said...

:) u kno I gotta make sure yall know about teedra!!! dammit! hahaha.. and of course I would notice a debonair lady

flawsandall said...

will be back to read

who? said...

I just peeped... how I'ma be tellin someone about gettin butt... and don't even holla at the stripper?

*shocked and appauled* lol

The Flyyest said...

That was good!!!!!!!!! what an imagination!!

i.can't.complain. said...

i think i know who the other man is.

mum's the word.

lol.

u gone get me cut by KB, Desy....

my sugar knows my gaze is for her only.

i can sooo see swag talking about teedra.

can't wait for part III.

-1-

Desy said...

@KB- hahaha, he's 6'4"; clearly she does hun, she does; I look forward to seeing how this jersey/rashan thing will develop…lol

@canon- haha… gotta make sure I offer some tru suspense for my bloggers… and hit unexpectantly with something surprising… if only I knew what that was

U weren't at the bachelor party…lol

@shan- haha, you don't know soumy remember? Why u knockin her hustle…lol. You kno me rah.. I change my mind freq on the direction of this thing… we'll see who it turns out to be

@don- *taking a bow* why thank you don…haha, yeh, there's lots of blog love out there

@charles- *blushing*… I just do my best to write a story I would be interested in… I'm especially glad that u like it

@1/3- hahaha, you hadn't finished reading it when I last talked to you that night that I posted it… 'jersey' is definitely gonna add some…um… spice to the ceremony

@diva-haha, it won't be based off of that… initially I was, but I think I'm just gonna go in a different direction~ it should be interesting for sure

@char- lol… she is low key in the states so I figured she would definitely be less known in 9ja… a witch?...not at all… just common sense..lol

@soum- hahaha, what a mixture…now I want you to tell me how this is eerily similar to what you've been thru soum.. You got a girl wonderin over here

@jam- haha, not everything is a 100% accurate depiction… I love the idea of that ring…*daydreaming*

@stacie- last minute date? Who knows…lol

@jintu- honestly, no one really knows… not even me…lol

@james- honestly, they do flow out quite quickly… I just have to force myself to sit down and do it…lol… but usually, I'm thru in about 30min or so; publishing?...me?... I don't kno about that

@des- I figured u to be that way… laid back and good with the one liners…

@deja- girl… always wantin to be the center…don't u kno in truth, it's all about me?!?!?...hahaha

@britt- I just kept thinkin about that picture with your back turned and your hair…haha

@swag- I kno teedra's your number 1… a debonair woman…the stripper? I thought that was me…lol?...

@flyy- when all u got is time on your hands…lol

@i.cant- neva that doll.. We're all aware of KB's standing… but people still look… even the most committed… and that chick was BANGin…lol

Eb the Celeb said...

hahahha... all this drama at my expense... Soumy will always and forever be my blog husband... you described the perfect ring too... loves it...

and what is Rashan talking about he already know and I dont even know...lol

Queen of My Castle said...

Dang Desy, you have us all on edge here...so when should we expect the next installment?! You've got mad talent, Missy.

lea78 said...

who is it? I hate cliff hangers. I'll be back

Muze said...

oooooh. plot thickens.

kinda jealous i wasn't invited to the wedding though.

*sad face*

lol.

this is pretty creative.

cracking up at KB about to cut -1-.

Muze said...

oh, and this SO sounds like something eb would do.


LOL.

Eb the Celeb said...

Dang Muze... why do I sound like I would leave a bruh at the altar...lol

Don said...

@ desy: you're welcome. this is some good writing on your behalf. props.

guerreiranigeriana said...

glad i'm reading this in one sitting...the anticipation would have killed me!!...